One step forward one step back
Trying to keep myself on track
Watching everyone around me
So close and yet so far
That’s where they are
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Words From The Borderline 
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Often it seems like one step back and one forth, but in reality it is one step back and TWO forward. Just keep moving on and it will be so. Beautiful poem, form and content!
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Thank you new friend
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Yes, around you. That’s where we are.
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Thanks Pelgris that means a lot
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I feel that so often, I feel like I have taken a step forward, but then I fall 10 steps back. Loved this…
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Thank you Soldier – if that’s what you want me to call you – it’s nice to feel that I am not alone in my struggle – I hope it helps you as well
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That is fine, yea life no matter what your age sometimes throws us curves or just hits us in the head. Sometimes it can get you done, but life is something ever changing and just when I think I have lost hope, amazing things happen that give me back that hope. With me, I don’t consider myself a writer or poet, just someone who writes what I feel and it is my way of expressing things I use to have troubles expressing any other way. Hope you have a great day.
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Hope you had a great day too. I understand what you mean
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